Manuscript Assessment

A manuscript assessment is often the best place to begin when working with an editor, especially if it is your first time getting outside feedback.  A manuscript assessment allows the editor to consider your writing on both a macro and micro level.  I will pay careful attention to your story’s structure, plot development, pacing, characterization, dialogue, tone, clarity, cohesiveness, delivery and style.  If necessary, I will also comment upon grammar and syntax.

One aspect that distinguishes my assessments from those of other editors is the unique perspective I bring as a former literary agent.  In addition to evaluating craft, I will put on my agent hat and provide feedback on the project’s salability and how it fits within the greater publishing landscape.  I will share with readers whether or not I would have made them an offer of representation, and why.  If needed, I’ll recommend ways to improve a project’s marketability.

Manuscript assessments include detailed comments and edits on the page, as well as a comprehensive editorial letter.  My ed letters are extremely thorough.  In a friendly, candid, and constructive manner, I will highlight your project’s strengths, identify any weaknesses, and outline what additional work is needed for your book to achieve its full potential.  My goal is that you will come away with a clear understanding of what changes need to be made, and how to implement them.  Once you’ve had the chance to review my letter and notes, we’ll arrange a time to speak by phone to discuss any remaining questions.

Developmental Editing

For writers seeking a deeper level of editorial guidance, and an ongoing relationship between writer and editor, I provide developmental editing services.  Most often, I provide developmental edits to returning clients who have revised their work and are seeking additional feedback and instruction.  Our mutual goal is to get the project where it needs to be to attract the attention of an editor or agent.  This may involve targeted feedback on a specific area of the writing, or it may take the shape of an additional manuscript assessment.  Sometimes it is simply a final polish before a project goes on submission.  I tailor each developmental edit to a project’s unique needs, and will always connect with a client in a preliminary phone call to discuss how we can work together most effectively to move their project toward the finish line.  Together, we will determine the scope and duration of our work.

Developmental editing is generally a longer process involving close communication between the writer and editor and may include multiple rounds of notes and edits.  Please don’t hesitate to reach out to discuss your project’s specific needs.

Proposal Crafting and Editing

As an agent, I was known for my nonfiction list, and I am an expert at creating and shaping nonfiction proposals. As your proposal editor, I will hold your work to the same rigorous standards I held my clients’ proposals, with the goal of getting you ready for submission.

First I will share my time-tested proposal guide so you can be certain your proposal includes all the information editors need. If you already have a proposal in place, I will assess each section of your proposal to be certain it provides the essential information in a compelling way, in addition to evaluating the clarity of the writing, strength of your argument, and the reach of your platform.

Ghostwriting

If you are seeking a ghostwriter or co-writer for your project, I am also available to write your proposal and/or manuscript. This collaborative process involves frequent communication between writer and author. Please contact me here for more information.